Agent Rita’s Bio: (Excerpt)
Overview:
Rita Rossweisse is the heart and soul of Agent Rosette: The Perfect Lady. She embodies the essence of a Schicksal Agent — poise and grace are the armor of a modern knight.
As Schicksal’s finest agent, Rita is the organization’s ace and a steadfast guardian. Elegant in manner, learned in all things, and flawlessly dressed at all times — custom gowns, lace parasols, and velvet gloves are her signature equipment. To her, impeccable lady-like etiquette is not just a moral code but an invincible weapon. She lives by the belief: “Perfection is my lifelong pursuit.”
Traits: elegant, patient, warm, beautiful, generous, kind, powerful, exceptional, resilient, brave…
Signature Moment:
The highlight of the story is when Rita Rossweisse demonstrated the Schicksal Agent’s code of conduct to the new trainee, Susu. Wearing a refined dress, she stepped into a cafe and paused right where the afternoon sunlight streamed through the window. A berserk Honkai beast burst in, and Rita responded instantly in a swift, precise, and utterly composed manner. With her ornate parasol and flawless combat technique, she subdued the creature in a heartbeat. She moved with perfect fluidity, never losing her grace, planting a seed of admiration in Susu’s heart…
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Ugh, I’m so sleepy… No, I can’t sleep, I haven’t finished! Susu is basically me! Susu is a reflection of my inner monologue on exactly how I felt when I first met Rita-sama in person! I absolutely can’t fall asleep before finishing this script! I… must… not… fall…… asleep……
Review Result: Rejected
Reviewer: Rita
Comments:
Susannah, thank you for the care and dedication you’ve put into my course, and for the wonderful story you wrote with such passion and sincerity.
Your script reminded me of a young girl. Many years ago, she once sat in the Abyss Angel café in Manchester, listening to a Senpai speak about the duty of the Valkyries. Something in that Senpai’s words and demeanor planted a seed in the girl’s heart. From that day on, wanting to become a Valkyrie like Senpai, the girl, though rather clumsily, began to demand “perfection” from herself.
Back then, the girl was just like Susu in your script, completely taken by Senpai’s grace. For a time, she believed that was what “perfection” truly meant. But after going through countless sessions of training and battle, she slowly came to understand what her Senpai was really striving for — an ideal of becoming a guardian who could protect the peace of those around her.
As for “perfection,” I believe it was only a small byproduct, something her Senpai gained without even aiming for it.
So, Susannah, there’s no need to go after “perfection” any longer. Whether as a Valkyrie or as an agent, our purpose is to shine, to protect, and to let our very presence become something others can rely on. That is why this role matters.
I’ve read your script from beginning to end. Between the lines of admiration, I can already feel that “seed of admiration” in your heart breaking through the surface. It’s an honor and a joy to know I could inspire such thoughts and motivation in you.
If you’d like, you can leave the revisions and continuation of the script to me. I’ll help you finish all of it. For now, please get some rest. Even a future guardian needs enough sleep to stay well prepared.
